Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Ask Amy Green Boy Trouble By: Sarah Webb Eva Wertimer

Ask Amy Green Boy Trouble By: Sarah Webb                                             Eva Wertimer   7E #4

Be argumentative:

I don't think that the author should have put the whole part about Amy's mom changing her style and looks. It took away form the main problems of the book. I really disliked the part about Amy's mom getting her hair messed up. That part made it seem like Amy's mom still loved her dad even though she has moved in with Dave and had two kids with him. It made Amy's mom seem like she was jealous  of Amy's dads girlfriend Shelly. But then the author  never made any of that clear.

I also didn't like the part about Sophie (Amy's Kind of Friend) and her mom's pearls.  I thought that part was rushed and just added to make the book longer. I thought the main problem should have been Amy and the advice column, and Amy and Seth (Amy's boyfriend). The whole thing about Sophie's mom blaming her stolen pearls on Amy was in my opinion pointless. It was solved to quickly and wasn't explained very well. It was kind of obvious that Sophie took them and framed Amy. Sophie had it out for Amy during the entire book. Other than those two parts I thought the book was very good.

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  2. EVA!!! u descibed ur book very well and i feellike i already read it.u didnt hav any problems in ur writing
    Alma Crisp

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  3. I think that you made a really good argument about Amy's mom being jealous about her ex-husband. It probably did take a lot away from the story. I really enjoyed reading this blog!!!
    Talya Guenzburger 7E

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